Divers Watches a Dream Even if Your not a Diving Pro
Diving watches are designed for divers who need to rely on an accurate and sophisticated timepiece, no matter their environment. A divers watch is designed so, at a minimum, they are able to offer a water resistance of ten atmosphere units. This is equivalent to one hundred meters, or three hundred and thirty feet. Typical diver watches, which are available on the market, are going to offer their wearers a water resistance of two hundred to three hundred meters, which is equivalent to diving depths of six hundred and sixty to nine hundred and ninety feet. Modern technology has been impressive in this field and today’s diver watches will allow their wearers to enjoy deeper diving depths without hurting or injuring the watch itself. The International Organization for Standardization, or the ISO, defines the test standards and features in order to help determine which watches are more capable as diver’s watches. A true diver’s wristwatch will often be in accordance with the standards set forth in ISO 6425. In order to distinguish which watches are in line with ISO 6425 and which are not, the watches that do adhere to the standards are marked with the word “DIVER’S”. If a watch has this word printed on it, it is a suitable one for scuba diving.
Some additional requirements for diving watches include the presence of a bezel that is unidirectional. The bezel needs to have at least every five minute markings as well as a pre-select marker to denote a specific minute marking. Minute markings on the face need to be clear and easy to read. These watches also need to have readability or visibility at 25 centimeters, or 9.84 inches, in total and complete darkness. These watches also need to be designed to be chemically resistant. In order to test this, the watches are immersed in a solution for twenty four hours in order to test the watch’s resistance to rust.
Diver watches have been improved upon over time, but in the early days of diver watches they were developed in response to the needs of military and professional divers. It is believed that Omega enjoys the distinction of creating the world’s first diving watch. While watch dealers offer a number of more modern Omega and other divers wristwatches, the first diver’s watch Omega had created was the Omega Marine, which was introduced in the year 1932. In addition to Omega, there are a number of companies that are able to offer consumers highly functional watches designed for diving. They are designed as tool watches, but they can also be designed with fashion in mind. Diver watches have been designed for both men and women, in either an analog or a digital format.
Diver watches need to have a case that is adequately water resistant. It also needs to be able to endure the seawater’s galvanic corrosiveness. Many, including those featured by online watch dealers, are made out of materials such as stainless steel, titanium, ceramics, resin or plastic. Some of the most impressive and popular diver’s watches include the Omega Seamaster 300 M Diver Chronometer, the Breitling Avenger Seawolf Chronograph and the IWC Aquatimer Minute Memory.
Joseph Levy
Honest feedback on this short story please? Am i any good?
HIGH DIVING MOLLY
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To jump or not to jump; that was her dilemma. Molly Kassel had never liked heights, and she had never planned to start any time soon. As a thirteen year old it wasn’t that big a deal. But she wanted to be a diver, so hating high up places was out of the question.
She had discovered her dream during gym class. At first she thought it was stupid and a waist of time. But after the coach explained the art of it – and had one of the high school’s best divers show her and her classmates how it was done – she was hooked. And not only on diving.
His name was Taylor Collins. As the coach explained how he would be doing a simple straight nose dive, Molly noticed how in shape he was for a fifteen year old. He took his place on one of the smaller diving boards, his focus unbreakable it seemed. One bend of the knees, then two, then three. His body curved to make a loose ‘U’ shape as he pushed himself off the board. His arms stretched out to make a perfect point as he dove towards the water. There was barely any splash.
All the kids clapped, looking eager to have their turn. Molly felt nervous and it showed. She couldn’t help but pick at the ends of her long, wavy brown hair. “He’s cute, right?” Her friend Amy smiled widely, elbowing her in the side playfully. Molly wrinkled her small, freckle spotted nose, trying to act as if she hadn’t noticed. “I guess.” Molly shrugged, still picking at her hair.
“Alright, kids! Line up by the diving board and we’ll see what level you’re at!” The coach shouted, his chubby face shiny from the humidity. Molly stood with the rest of her class, not looking forward to her turn. She was horrible in gym and having herclassmates watch was bad enough, but now Taylor Collins was going to see it. Her stomach did a flip, putting her nerves on edge. “Try doing what Mr. Collins did to the best of your abilities.” The coach instructed, motioning for Berry -one of her more annoying classmates -to step up to the board. He grinned, giving his friends a thumbs up, and then belly flopped. Most everyone laughed as he came back up, his chest and stomach red, a scowl on his face.
Molly gulped, her heart racing now. What if she did that? What if everyone laughed at her? She hated it. Junior high was hard enough when you didn’t look like a dough-head, let alone when you did. Her turn was coming up fast. Most of the students so far did ok and only a few were bad, but they hadn’t belly flopped. Molly smiled nervously as Amy’s turn came up, she turned to give Molly a little wink befor getting onto the board. Why couldn’t she be good at everything like Amy? It just wasn’t fair. And of course she did great; better than most.
Molly froze when the coach called for thenext person in line. Kids complained and told her to get a move on, but she couldn’t. Sure, this board wasn’t that high up, but she just knew she’d look silly if she tried. “Hey,” She jumped, realizing it was Taylor Collins speaking to her. “Its not as hard as it looks, trust me. Besides, there’s no right or wrong way to dive, just go with your gut.” He smiled, Molly blushed. She thought she might scream but bit her lip quickly. If Taylor said it was easy, what did she have to worry about? Showing everyone I cant even do something easy, that’s what!, she thought in a slight panic.
Its not as if she had a choice, though. So, taking a very deep breath, she stepped out onto the board. She felt awkward walking to the end, the board bouncing with every step she took. She couldn’t let herself stop, though, or else she might freeze up again. She bent her knees like Taylor had, pushed herself from the board, closed her eyes and bent her body as much as she could, keeping her arms as straight as a pencil. Cold water rush past her, some getting up her nose. It felt great! Like passing a hard test and eating chocolate ice cream all at once! She kicked her way to the surface, forgetting about gym class completely.
There was clapping when she came up, loud and echoing all around her. She wiped water from her eyes, her brain not yet processing that they were clapping for her. She swam to the edge of the pool, smiling. Taylor was there to help her out, his brown eyes looking pleased. “See? You did great! You might want to join the team.” He commented, his smile making her stomach do flips again, but in a good way. “Cant.” Molly sighed, looking at the high dive. “Well why not, you’re good at it?” Taylor asked, frowning his brow. Molly rocked back on her heels nervously, looking at the floor. “I’m…” She paused, hating to say it. It was so embarrassing! “I’m afraid of heights.” She mumbled, fidgeting. “That’s no big, you’ll just have to work past it. Try jumping off the high dive, its not so bad.” Taylor shrugged, not seeming too put off by it.
Now here she was, standing at the bottom of the high dive. School was out for the day, but she wanted
Thanks so much for the honest feedback, i’ll work on fixing the mistakes mentioned. If you would like the read the rest of the story, its posted at this link: http://quizilla.teennick.com/stories/16636775/high-diving-molly
It’s very good so far. You should definitely continue writing it.
But she wanted to be a diver, so hating high up places was out of the question. <- Okay, at first I thought you meant scuba diver, then sky diver, and last I thought of the high school swim team diver you were talking about. Maybe make this clearer earlier?
At first she thought it was stupid and a waist of time. <- Waste, not waist.
She was horrible in gym and having herclassmates watch was bad enough. . . <- Should be her classmates.
Most everyone laughed as he came back up, his chest and stomach red, a scowl on his face. <- ‘Almost everyone’ laughed would sound better.
. . . she turned to give Molly a little wink befor getting onto the board. <- You left off the ‘e’ at the end of before.
Molly froze when the coach called for thenext person in line. <- You forgot to put a pace between ‘the’ and ‘next’.
“Cant.” <- Should be can’t.
"Well why not, you’re good at it?” <- Would sound and look better like this: ‘Well why not? Your good at it!’
“That’s no big, . . ." <- Should be that’s no biggie.
Taylor shrugged, not seeming too put off by it. <- You are missing the word be, it should be between ‘too’ and ‘put’.
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There were a few typos and you should re-phrase some of it but you do have some talent.
Keep writing, the more you write the better you will get at it.
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wow. that all i can say. :] ( thts a good thing )
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I especially like the "ice cream-hard test" simile.
In the second paragraph, the correct word would be "waste."
Overall, it’s pretty good. I think it would really appeal to preteens.
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It seems kind of odd to me that someone that doesn’t like heights would want to be a diver…
Other than that, I liked how you described the guy diving, it was really good. I think you’ve got a pretty good style, but, also, make sure you punctuate the dialect correctly. Every time a different person speaks, it should be a new paragraph
Good luck (:
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This is incredible! You have MAJOR talent!!
Can you email the rest of the story?
Please?
😀
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